這個系列來自部落“四六級作文訓練營：改詞擴句”，本節目適合備考英語四級和英語六級的朋友，以及有志於提高英語寫作水平的朋友，旨在幫助大家寫英文作文時，用語更加地道和規範。
本期繼續我們的改詞擴句，主講換詞和關係詞。。
原句：
They give us new information about the latest products. Some advertisements are very elegantly presented. And we are inspired or even moved by them. No matter it is an evil or an angel, advertisement has become an essential part of our modern life.
改句：
They provide us with up-to-date information about the latest products. Some advertisements are so elegantly presented that we are inspired or even moved. No matter it is an evil or an angel, advertisement has become an indispensable part of our modern life.
【解析】原句中有"give"這個常用詞，我們細想一下用一個比較高階的.片語"provide sb. with sth."來替換它，同理，我們把"new"換成"up-to-date"，把"essential"換成"indispensable"。
然後，再看原句中的連線詞"and"，我們可以發現And連線的前後句並不是並列關係，而是因果關係，所以我們可以用"so…that…"來連線兩個句子。
下面大家自己試試看吧!
President Bush said that medical science has given the power to some people to help save these young lives.
答案：President Bush said that medical science has provided some people with the power to help save these young lives.
