書面表達評分標準“最高檔”要求：“應用了較多的語法結構或詞彙；語法結構或詞彙方面有少許錯誤，但為盡力使用較複雜結構或較高階詞彙所致；有效地使用了語句間的連線成分，使全文結構緊湊。”從歷年書面表達高分文章來看，每篇文章都有“亮”點，即在用詞、造句或段落安排上都有獨到之處。
要想獲得高分就應在“正確”表達的基礎上寫出自己的特色，寫出自己的“亮”點。
一、詞彙選擇——標新立異
在寫作中“較高階詞彙”的使用主要是指使用《大綱》上沒有的詞語、使用通過構詞法變化來的新詞、使用同(近)義詞或反義詞等來代替常見詞語。
1)這棟房子在芳草街的一棟樓上。
A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.
B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.
分析:is in是常見詞語，而situates in則是《大綱》上沒有的，屬於高階詞彙。
2)在週末我們做很多作業。
A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.
B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.
分析:B句在表達時沒有使用過於直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大綱》詞彙end加字尾-less變化來的。
3)洗澡間和廚房都很好。
A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.
B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.
在表達要點時，B句使用了well furnished,這比good語氣強，也顯得生動。
在造句時,“較高階詞彙”如能運用貼切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一個，也會使你的作文顯示出與眾不同。
二、結構造句——與眾不同
在造句時,既要使句子生動，又要使其簡明扼要。
1、使用與人不同的表達方式，特別是提倡打破漢語句子結構的束縛而重組的句子更受歡迎。
1)唐山曾在二十世紀八十年代發生過一次大地震。
A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.
B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.
大多數同學使用了there be結構，這是對的，但是B句卻摒棄了常見句式。另闢蹊徑而使用了“主語+謂語+賓語”結構，且使用了terrible,hit/strike這樣的詞彙，更是難能可貴的。
2)你八月十五日的來信我今天早晨收到了。
A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多數人使用的方式)
B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(與多數人使用的方式不同,簡潔)
2.使用一些強勢句式，如強調句、感嘆句、倒裝句等，增強語句的表現力。如：
3)阿福救了我妹妹。
A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)
B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(強調句式)
4)我們看到莊稼和蔬菜長勢喜人很是高興。
A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陳述句)
B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感嘆句)
3、句式多樣,複雜得體。在寫作中應避免使用相同長度的相同句型，而應注意句式的變化，如長短句結合，簡單句、並列句與複合句共用，還可使用簡化句等；一些較複雜的結構如獨立主格，分詞結構等也可使用。下面的表達中A句簡單句多，而且多處使用there be結構，顯得單調、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(請同學們自己分析)。
5)這是一套25平方米的住房，住房裡面有臥室、有洗澡間、有廚房；臥室裡有床、沙發、桌子和椅子等。
A: It's a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.
B: It's a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.
三、佈局謀篇——獨具匠心
在寫作中，我們可按時間、空間或其它邏輯順序來安排各要點，同時為使主題突出,結構嚴謹，我們應注意學習和使用交代句以及段落的主題句等。在佈局謀篇上，2002大學聯考範文堪稱典範。請看：
Opinions are pided on the question.
60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.
1)該文使用Opinions are pided...作交代句，開門見山，隨後兩個段落均使用了主題句(見黑體字部分)，使全文結構緊湊，表達嚴謹。
2)在表述要點時範文還對要點出場順序作了調整，如“40%的同學認為應收門票，但不宜過高。”前部分作為主題句放在句首，而後部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.這樣就分清了輕重緩急，主題突出，條理清楚。
3)範文使用了and, what is more, however等連詞，在段落之間使用了on the other hand(說明前後兩個觀點是相悖的)，這些連線手段的運用加強了句子之間、段落之間的聯絡，使文章表達連貫，渾然一體。
4)範文在第二段為說明不收門票的“原因”時增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等細節，這也是解決句與句之間缺少連貫性的常見方法。
總之，要想使自己的文章有亮點，吸引讀者，在考試中獲得高分，就應在用詞、造句、謀篇上下功夫，哪怕是有一處特長都是“亮”點，都是值得肯定的。
高中英語萬能寫作模版：過渡短語精華美句
t of all ,Secondly，What's more, Next, Meanwhile, Besides
首先，其次，此外，下一步，同時，另外（列數觀點短語）
the one hand, On the other hand
一方面，另一方面
nts，
強調的是
rtheless，
儘管如此
be exact
精確地說
be sure,
當然
begin with,
首先，
for sth,
關於
is the reason why,
這就是為什麼，
general,
一般而言，
ly=That is to say
也就是說，
the saying goes，=The saying goes like that
有句諺語這樣說的
ttedly
誠然，
larly,
同樣的，
t and foremost,
首要的，
r all,
畢竟，
brief,
簡要地
英語寫作是大學聯考試題中對學生相對較難的部分，它考查考生綜合運用語言能力。
試題要求考生根據所給的情景和要求寫一篇書面材料。但它並非按照“提示”逐句翻譯，而是要求考生在充分領會“提示”的前提下，用自己的語言組織成一篇內容充實、語言正確、句子連貫、用詞貼切的作文。據統計，近幾年上海和全國英語大學聯考卷中的寫作，主要是關於記人、敘事、寫信和通知或看圖作文等內容的記敘文、議論文和應用文。
記敘文要求考生根據試卷中提供的情景，組織語言材料，編寫成文。一般說來記敘文有時間、地點、人物、事件、原因和結果六要素，寫作時要明白清楚地給予表達。記人時，要注意介紹人物的身世、經歷和事蹟等。敘事時要描寫事情發生與發展的過程，敘述事情發生的前因後果等。
議論文要求考生就某一方面的問題通過擺事實、講道理的方式來發表自己看法。一般說來議論文文由論點、論據、論證三部分構成。要做到：1、論點正確無誤。2、論據可靠充分。論據可以是人們公認的真理，也可以是經過實踐考證的經典著作。3、論證合理嚴密。人們常用的論證方法有歸納法、推理法、對比法。議論文一般按提出問題、分析問題、解決問題的邏輯順序來安排層次。
英語應用文主要以寫信為主。英文書信由6個部分組成。它們是信頭、信內地址、稱呼、正文、結束語、簽字。格式一定要正確。信的正文和寫文章一樣，要分段寫，每一段有一箇中心思想。
無論是記敘文、議論文還是應用文，在具體寫作過程中我們不妨按如下順序進行。
首先，確定寫作中心。根據這個中心，能夠擴充套件的材料有哪些。要避免寫那些與中心內容無關緊要的細節。
其次，圍繞中心，列出寫作提綱。提綱一定要包含所提供的情景要點，同時要儘量使用自己熟悉的詞彙與句型。
第三、根據字數多少，擴充套件成篇。擴充套件的內容一定要緊扣主題，千萬不要寫那些與主題不相關的內容。擴充套件時要注意短文的字數，要寫夠100個詞語，以避免由於字數不夠引起的扣分。
大學聯考英語作文超實用高分必備議論文萬能模板
模版1
Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 觀點1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 觀點2.
As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea. There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 論據1. More importantly, 論據2. Most important of all, 論據3.
In summary, 總結觀點. As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心. 或 From above, we can predict that 預測.
模版2
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 觀點1,while others point out that 觀點2.
As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more one thing, 論據1. For another, 論據2. Last but not the least, 論據3.
To conclude, 總結觀點. As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心. 或 From above, we can predict that 預測.
模版3
There is no consensus of opinions among people about X（爭論的焦點）. Some people are of the view that 觀點1, while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 觀點2.
As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious. First of all, 論據1. Furthermore, 論據2. Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 論據3.
A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that總結觀點. As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心. 或 From above, we can predict that 預測.
introducing a friend to another friend 介紹一個朋友給另一個
你的朋友魏東獲得了一筆到美國留學一年的獎學金。他去的那所學校碰巧有你一位好朋友Dick。你寫信把魏東介紹給Dick，希望他能幫助、照顧魏東，願他們也成為好朋友。
Dear Dick，
One of my best friends Wei Dong has just won a scholarship to study for one year in the United States. He’ll be leaving soon, and, believe it or not, he will be in the same school with you. I have told him a lot about you and he will go to see you right after his arrival. Since he is new there, I hope you could do whatever you can to help him begin a new life.
Wei Dong is a handsome tall boy of 18. He is a diligent student as well as a good guy to get along with. Besides his study, he has a wide range of interests, such as country music and basketball. I hope you can learn from each other and become good friends.
Best wishes.
親愛的迪克，
我最好的朋友之一魏東剛剛贏得了一筆到美國留學一年的獎學金。他很快就要走了，而且，不管你信不信，他會跟你在同一所學校。我已經告訴過他很多關於你和他他到了之後會見到你。因為他是新生，我希望你能盡你所能幫助他開始新的生活。
魏東是一個高大英俊的18歲的男孩。他是一個勤奮的且和人很好相處的學生。除了他的學習，他興趣廣泛，如鄉村音樂和籃球。我希望你們可以互相學習，成為好朋友。
最好的祝福。
大學聯考英語作文的必背點睛100句（三）
51. There is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon of college or high school students' doing a part-time job.
對於大學或高中生打工這一現象，校園裡進行著廣泛的爭論。
52. By taking a major-related part-job，students can not only improve their academic studies，but gain much experience，experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.
通過做一份和專業相關的工作，學生不僅能夠提高他們的專業能力，而且能獲得從課本上得不到的經驗。
53. Although people’s lives have been dramatically changed over the last decades，it must be admitted that，shortage of funds is still the one of the biggest questions that students nowadays have to face because that tuition fees and prices of books are soaring by the day.
近幾十年，儘管人們的生活有了驚人的改變，但必須承認，由於學費和書費日益飛漲，資金短缺仍然是學生們面臨的最大問題之一。
54. Consequently，the extra money obtained from part-time job will strongly support students to continue to their study life.
因此，業餘工作掙來的錢將強有力地支援學生們繼續他們的求學生活。
55. From what has been discussed above，we may safely draw a conclusion that part-time job can produce a far-reaching impact on students and they should be encouraged to take part-time job，which will benefit students and their family，even the society as a whole.
通過上面的討論，我們不難得出結論：業餘工作對學生們會產生深遠的影響，我們應鼓勵學生從事業餘工作，這將有利於學生和他們的家庭，甚至整個社會。
56. These days，people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in past. Many experts point out that，along with the development of modern society，it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.
現在，越來越多的人們開始抱怨工作比以前更有壓力。許多專家指出這是現代社會發展必然的結果，無法避免。
57. It is widely acknowledged that computer and other machines have become an indispensable part of our society，which make our life and work more comfortable and less laborious.
人們普遍認為計算機和其他機器已經成為我們社會必不可少的一部分。 它們使我們的生活更舒適，減少了大量勞動。
58. At the same time，along with the benefits of such machines，employees must study knowledge involved in such machines so that they are able to control them.
同時，隨著這些機器帶給我們的好處，員工們也必須要學習與之相關的知識以便使用它們。
59. No one can deny the basic fact that it is impossible for average workers to master those high-technology skills easily.
沒有人能否認這一基本事實：對於一般工人來講，輕鬆掌握這些技術是不可能的'。
60. In the second place，there seem to be too many people without job and not enough job position.
第二方面，失業的人似乎太多而又沒有足夠的工作崗位。 61. Millions of people have to spend more time and energy on studying new skills and technology so that they can keep a favorable position in job market.
成千上萬的人們不得不花費更多的精力和時間學習新的技術和知識，使得他們在就業市場能保持優勢。
62. According to a recent survey，a growing number of people express a strong desire to take another job or spend more time on their job in order to get more money to support their family.
根據最近的一項調查，越來越多的人表達了想從事另外的工作或加班以賺取更多的錢來補貼家用的強烈願望。
63. From what has been discussed above，I am fully convinced that the leisure life-style is undergoing a decline with the progress of modern society，it is not necessary a bad thing.
通過以上討論，我完全相信，隨著現代社會的進步，幽閒的生活方式正在消失並不是件壞事。
64. The problem of international tourism has caused wide public concern over the recent years.
近些年，國際旅遊的問題引起了廣泛關注。
65. Many people believe that international tourism produce positive effects on economic growth and local government should be encouraged to promote international tourism.
許多人認為國際旅遊對經濟發展有積極作用，應鼓勵地方政府發展國際旅遊。
66. But what these people fail to see is that international tourism may bring about a disastrous impact on our environment and local history.
但是這些人忽視了國際旅遊可能會給當地環境和歷史造成的災難性的影響。
67. As for me，I'm firmly convinced that the number of foreign tourists should be limited，for the following reasons：
就我而言，我堅定地認為國外旅遊者的數量應得到限制，理由如下：
68. In addition，in order to attract tourists，a lot of artificial facilities have been built，which have certain unfavorable effects on the environment.
另外，為了吸引旅遊者，大量人工設施被修建，這對環境是不利的。
69. For lack of distinct culture，some places will not attract tourists any more. Consequently，the fast rise in number of foreign tourists may eventually lead to the decline of local tourism.
由於缺乏獨特的文化，一些地方不再吸引旅遊者。因此，國外旅遊者數量的快速增加可能最終會導致當地旅遊業的衰敗。
70. There is a growing tendency for parents to ask their children to accept extra educational programs over the recent years.
近些年，父母要求他們的孩子接受額外的教育呈增長的勢頭。
71. This phenomenon has caused wide public concern in many places of world.
這一現象在全世界許多地方已引起了廣泛關注。
72. Many parents believe that additional educational activities enjoy obvious advantage. By extra studies，they maintain，their children are able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge，which will put them in a beneficial position in the future job markets when they grow up.
許多家長相信額外的教育活動有許多優點，通過學習，他們的孩子可以獲得很多實踐技能和有用的知識，當他們長大後，這些對他們就業是大有好處的。
73. In the first place，extra studies bring about unhealthy impacts on physical growth of children. Educational experts point out that，it is equally important to take some sport activities instead of extra studies when children have spent the whole day in a boring classroom.
首先，額外的學習對孩子們的身體發育是不利的。教育專家指出，孩子們在枯燥的教室裡呆了一整天后，從事一些體育活動，而不是額外的學習，是非常重要的。
74. Children are undergoing fast physical development; lack of physical exercise may produce disastrous influence on their later life.
孩子們正處於身體快速發育時期，缺乏體育鍛煉可能會對他們未來的生活造成嚴重的影響。
75. In the second place，from psychological aspect，the majority of children seem to tend to have an unfavorable attitude toward additional educational activities.
