BEC作文考察的是考生英語表達能力，商務英語高階對考生的商務知識的要求很高，所以考生一定要在語言功底上下功夫。 下面是yjbys網小編為大家提供的關於商務英語寫作備考指南。
首先一點，我們必須牢記，歸根結底，BEC作文考察的還是考生英語表達能力。所以學生並不需要擔心自己缺乏這方面的實際經驗是否會影響考場發揮。(順便提一句，BEC高階對商務知識的要求大大提高，因此考生要在語言功底上苦下功夫。比如說，寫商務報告的固定格式和用於必須牢記在心。)
與此同時，試題結合商務實戰的`特點，要求文章必須包含特定資訊點，或者是通過提供資訊源，以及考題中的標註，規定考生寫作的具體範圍和內容。所以審題是關鍵，所有已知條件都必須充分利用，換言之，如果遺漏已知條件，就會因資訊表達不完整而導致失分。以下是對我的一名學員習文進行點評。PART ONEYou have been informed that next Wednesday your company's computer system will be closed down so that improvements can be e an email to all staff in your department: saying what time on Wednesday the system will be closed down suggesting how staff should prepare for this saying how the system will be better after the improvements Write 40--50 words 學生作文：From: Jenny XuTo: All StaffDate: 5 April 2009Subject: Computer SystemI want to tell you that our Intranet based on Linux will be closed next Wednesday at 10 o’clock.. I want to suggesting that you should save all your important documents. The computer system will be faster because we will use a newer SAP system. The new system is according to ISO900 and we will benefit from that. 作文解析：
BEC作文解答時，審題非常重要。題目中給出的要求就好比是解代數題中已知條件，都要用到。小作文處理的時候，大家不妨可以把每一個已知條件擴寫成一句句句子，同時兼顧句子之間的連線。
通常學生犯的錯誤是：
1. 漏掉題中給出的已知條件。
2. 給出的已知條件沒有表達清楚，用詞過於口語化，沒有條理，暴露出語言功底薄弱。
3. 切忌過於花哨的發揮，多說多錯。
這篇學生的作品是比較典型的案例。作者有一定的英語表達能力和工作經驗，但文章中所暴露出來的不足也是明顯的。寫作不能從細處下筆，而是先要搭建框架。以這篇習文為例，作者在具體語言的表達的雕琢上可圈可點，比如說第一個句子中based on引導的過去分詞做後置定語，但是顯而忘記了這篇文章的主要目的，那就是通知同事公司電腦系統要升級，但update這個詞始終沒有在文章中出現，因此讀下來以後，可能同事還不是非常清楚，為什麼computer system will be closed down, 儘管後面提到了improvement，總讓人覺得有些如鯁在咽，言之不盡;因此，思路不清晰是這篇習文最大的問題。
此外，本文還有以下一些問題：
1. 有些用詞過於口語化，比如說，文章開頭, I want to tell you, 文中you should save這樣的用語;
2. 建議Linux, 將SAP, ISO900等唬人術語統統除去，誠然BEC涉及到基本的商務知識，但是真正考核的還是語言功底，語用能力;商務知識好比是蓋澆飯裡面的小炒而已。
3.裡面還有一個明顯的語法錯誤，I want to suggesting….，當然閱卷者不會刻意去搜尋語法錯誤，而是綜合考量語法得分，但由於小作文篇幅較短，那麼這個錯誤就顯得非常明顯。範文：Please be informed that our computer system will be closed next Wednesday at 12 o'clock for system upgrade. The closure will last for at least two hours. Make sure that you have saved all your documents before that time. The whole system will run on a new server, much faster than the current one. PART TWOl You work for PJT Ltd, a manufacturing company. You need more staff in your department and your line manager has asked you to write a report explaining why.l Look at the information below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes.l Then, using all your handwritten notes, write your report.l Write 120-140 words.學生作文：The purpose of this report is to explain why we need more staff in our compare the number of staff in our department between 2001 and 2003, it only increased five staff. But the average number of ordered units grow up from 200000 to 400000 between 2001 and 2003. Our sales department has announced a big new order from an international company recently. It will bring us much more workload. And the annual holiday increased to 5 weeks per year. That means that we have more workload and less working we had more staff the order should be on time. We should save our company’s reputation. And the workflow will be improved.
