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英語二圖表作文分析

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本週與同學們繼續分享英語二圖表作文的寫作思路及語言,上週我們分析的是柱形圖的寫作思路和模板,這周我們繼續進行表格的寫作和模板的介紹,首先同學們要知道我們圖表的寫作是不同的圖表有著不同的特點和寫作的要點,而表格是近幾年的考的只考過一次,但是作為重點考察的表格來說,同學們也要進行重點學習。表格體現的特點是資料的之間的差異,而這種寫作的思路是要應用在文章中間得到體現的,那我們就來看一下針對於柱型圖有什麼寫作的.要點和寫作的思路。首先我們一起來看一下真題

英語二圖表作文分析

Directions: Write an essay based on the following table. In your writing, you should

1) describe the table, and

2) give your comments.

You should write at least 150 words.

Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

拿到一個題目還是先要進行圖片文字部分的閱讀,本年的題目還是要求兩個部分,同學們可以分為三段來進行寫作:圖畫描述段、分析論證段和趨勢預測段。首先第一段的寫作思路遵循整體五句話的寫作思路:直觀評價、圖表標題、主流趨勢、最大變化和過渡句。首先直觀評價是最簡單的一句,可以說這是一個簡潔又準確的表格等,同學們可以適當的更改自己的語言。第二句圖表標題依然採用倒魚鉤的翻譯方法,圖表標題是某公司員工工作滿意度調查,可以翻譯為the job satisfaction of the employees in a certain company,主流趨勢是表格的特點,即所有指數針對於同一個話題體現了不同的趨勢,首先同一個話題是工作滿意度,那所有指數是什麼呢?我們可以看見這個表格體現的不同年齡段的員工對於工作滿意度有不同的趨勢或者態度,所以這句話可以說the employees at different ages show total different inclination towards the problem of job satisfaction。最大差異表現的資料中最有說服力最明顯的資料,通過表格可以看出這個資料就是0.0%和64.0%, 在描述時描述的是該資料體現的意義。過渡句比較簡單,直接說出上述現象值得我們更深一步的考慮即可。在第二段時注意分析上文最大差異產生的原因,這個圖主要分析在40-50歲的員工中為什麼員工滿意度最低或者為什麼不滿意度最高的原因,可以從以下的角度進行解釋:人到中年的職業發展前景並不是很好以及中年人有更多的責任,容易對工作不滿意等等方面進行分析,注意將每句話寫成整個的句子進行新增。最後一段進趨勢預測,直接寫這種趨勢將會持續下去就可以了,那麼基於以上思路,我們來看一下範文:

Here is a table chart, telling us an interesting phenomenon. There is no denying that the chart records the job satisfaction of the employees in a certain company, which successfully arouses our curiosity. As is clearly reflected by the chart, the employees at different ages show total different inclination towards the problem of job satisfaction. Especially, the employees in their forties show the most obvious inclination that 64% of them are dissatisfied with their jobs. Obviously, the inclinations, clearly reflected by the chart, should be given more consideration.

Theoretically, several reasons may trigger the trend that people in their forties show the most satisfaction, but for my part, the following two are of great importance. On the top of list is that the people face the heaviest burden of supporting children and aged people in their family. In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore. It is universally admitted that they are not open-minded towards success like people over 50 years old.

Taking into account what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that the current situation will continue in the forthcoming years. 上面就是整個真題的寫作的思路和語言表達,考研不是一個人的旅程,在考研的漫漫長路上,中公名師常伴你左右!

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