作文是各類英語考試中得分較低的一種題型,究其原因,除了平時缺少練習之外,同學們還缺乏作文抓分技巧。同學們需要掌握一定的作文模板,除此之外,如果能在作文中設定一些詞彙和句型的閃光點,必定使你的作文如虎添翼。
高分作文標誌: 1、是否長短句交叉;2、是否會使用插入語;3、用詞是否多樣、準確、形象,儘量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞; 4、關鍵詞是否換用,切勿老用重複詞; 5、句型使用是否準確、地道。
寫好一篇作文的注意事項
1. 適當用被動替換主動,這樣能更客觀地反映事實。句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)舉個經典結尾的例子:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
2. 善於使用插入語,比如說把副詞、連線詞等,作為插入語放在中間,一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞後,兩邊分別加上逗號。 如however / therefore / for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間,一般放在動詞、助動詞後,兩邊分別加上逗號。舉例如下:Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ...
3. 一定要學會換詞,換形象、具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如第一條的例子中,applicable 替換 proper;approaches 替換 ways;implement 替換 carry out;sharpen one's competitive edge 替換 enhance one's competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)。
優秀作文舉例 下面舉一篇某位同學寫的優秀作文的例子,看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法,精彩替換和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。
exceedingly 替換 very;(個人認為替換成overwhelmingly更出彩)
thrilling 替換 exciting;
sth. exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in sth;
google 替換 search;
an army of 替換 a lot of。
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型,用來描述在某個時期發生了什麼事情;
Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular;
Coincident with ... 非常地道的句型,表達"與...一致"的意思,替換 With ...;
Advancement 替換 development;
Pour into (flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into;
Current (currently)替換 now;
Appeal to sb. 替換 sb. be interested in sth.;
Growing individuals 替換 more and more people;
It is no exaggeration to say 經典句型, 說某事是毫不誇張的。(it goes without exaggeration that更好)
For a start 替換 To begin with;
We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法;
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被動;
Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides;
Deliver 替換 send。
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處,首先There is no denying that這個句型;其次however作為插入語;再次,function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to。
Emerging 替換 appearing (fading 替換 disappearing);
Net citizen 網民,屬於精彩用詞。(直接用 netizen更好)
No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides;
Computers do play ,使用do 表示強調;
Positive 替換 important / good 等;