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1、使用與人不同的表達方式，特別是提倡打破漢語句子結構的束縛而重組的句子更受歡迎。
1)唐山曾在二十世紀八十年代發生過一次大地震。
A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.
B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.
分析：大多數同學使用了there be結構，這是對的。但是B句卻摒棄了常見句式。另闢蹊徑而使用了“主語+謂語+賓語”結構，且使用了terrible,hit/strike這樣的.詞彙，更是難能可貴的。
2)你八月十五日的來信我今天早晨收到了。
A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多數人使用的方式)
B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(與多數人使用的方式不同,簡潔）
2.使用一些強勢句式，如強調句、感嘆句、倒裝句等，增強語句的表現力。
3)湯姆救了我妹妹。
A: Tom saved my sister.(一般句式)
B: It was Tom that saved my sister.(強調句式)
4)我們看到莊稼和蔬菜長勢喜人很是高興。
A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陳述句)
B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感嘆句)
◆強調句：可以輕鬆地將時間、地點、原因、方式等型別的狀語從句轉變為強調句。
It was not until I arrived home that I realized I had left the bag on the shop counter.
It was then that I realized the importance of English.
◆倒裝句：只要句中有介詞短語或狀語從句，便可將其提前，變成倒裝句。
Only when I turned right at the crossing did that car crack towards me.
Only by this means can he escape from the big fire.
◆with引導的伴隨結構：可以將狀語從句或並列句中的其中一個分句變成with結構。
With the sun lighting brightly and the birds singing clearly, I went to school in high spirits
He always likes to sleep with the windows open.
◆巧妙地使用非謂語動詞：可以將狀語從句或並列的動詞簡化為非謂語動詞。
Hearing that, the driver’s wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense after drinking. (低階形式：When he heard that, ……)
◆恰到好處的被動句：適合應用於較簡短的句子，這樣顯得語言簡潔生動，賓語一般是nothing、anything、everything等不定代詞。
Searched all my pockets, but nothing was found。
◆感嘆句：通常用於開頭結尾活躍文章氣氛，凡是“I feel ……”之類表達感情的句子皆可如此改造。
How terrible I felt today! I failed again in the math exam.
◆高階定語從句：若定語從句中的動詞帶有介詞，只需將介詞移至先行詞後。
We came to a place to which they had never paid a visit before.
◆進行時態：有時會含有一定情緒，尤其要使用always這樣的富含感情色彩的副詞。
I am always feeling terrible when I take a bus.
I could find nothing but bad luck when I returned the shop after learning that my handbag had been left on the counter.
◆what引導的名詞性從句：將動賓結構轉化為此結構。
3、句式多樣,複雜得體。
在寫作中應避免使用相同長度的相同句型，而應注意句式的變化，如長短句結合，簡單句、並列句與複合句共用，還可使用簡化句等；一些較複雜的結構如獨立主格，分詞結構等也可使用。
下面的表達中A句簡單句多，而且多處使用there be結構，顯得單調、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(請同學們自己分析)。
5)這是一套25平方米的住房，住房裡面有臥室、有洗澡間、有廚房；臥室裡有床、沙發、桌子和椅子等。
A: It's a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.
B: It's a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.
