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2017年6月英語四級寫作真題答案(卷二)

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寫作往往是考生難以取得高分的題目之一,下面,小編就為大家送上2017年6月英語四級寫作真題答案,供大家參考。

2017年6月英語四級寫作真題答案(卷二)

 Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an advertisement on your campus website to sell a computer you used at college. Your advertisement may include its brand, specifications/features, condition and price, and your contact information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

 參考範文

With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need. People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mousses. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.

  附:如何提高英語四級寫作技巧?

一、 長短句原則。

工作還得一張一弛呢,老讓讀者讀長句,累死人!寫一個短小精闢的句子,相反,卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主題:As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 如此可見,長短句結合,抑揚頓挫,豈不爽哉?牢記!

強烈建議:在文章第一段用一長一短,且先長後短;在文章主體部分,要先用一個短句解釋主要意思,然後在闡述幾個要點的時候採用先短後長的句群形式,定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝!文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了。

二、 主題句原則。

國有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否則會給人造成“群龍無首”之感!相信各位讀過一些破爛文學,故意把主體隱藏在文章之內,結果造成我們稀裡糊塗!不知所云!所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個主題句,放在文章的`開頭或者結尾,讓讀者一目瞭然,必會平安無事!

特別提示:隱藏主體句可是要冒險的!To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly。

三、 一 二 三原則。

領導講話總是第一部分、第一點、第二點、第三點、第二部分、第一點… 如此羅嗦。可畢竟還是條理清楚。考官們看文章也必然要通過這些關鍵性的“標籤”來判定你的文章是否結構清楚,條理自然。破解方法很簡單,只要把下面任何一組的詞彙加入到你的幾個要點前就清楚了。

1)first, second, third, last

2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally

3)the first, the second, the third, the last

4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly

5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally

6)to start with, next, in addition, finally

7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least

8)most important of all, moreover, finally

9)on the one hand, on the other hand

10)for one thing, for another thing

建議:不僅僅在寫作中注意,平時說話的時候也應該條理清楚!

四、短語優先原則。

寫作時,尤其是在考試時,如果使用短語,有兩個好處:其一、用短語會使文章增加亮點,如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單,看不到一個自己不認識的短語,必然會看你低一等。相反,如果發現亮點—精彩的短語,那麼你的文章定會得高分了。

其二、關鍵時刻思維短路,只有湊字數,怎麼辦?用短語是一個辦法!比如:I cannot bear it. 可以用短語表達:I cannot put up with it. I want it. 可以用短語表達:I am looking forward to it. 這樣字數明顯增加,表達也更準確。