想要學好英語六級作文怎麼能不知道這些作文寫作技巧呢?下面就讓小編為大家詳解一下吧。
一、避免使用語意弱的“be”動詞。
1.把句中的'表語轉換為不同的修飾語。例如:
Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.
Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (轉換為前置定語)
Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green.
轉換為並列結構作後置定語)
參考地址:
多練習。
2.將作表語用的形容詞或名詞變為行為動詞。例如:
1) Weak: The team members are good players.
Revision: The team members play well.
2) Weak: One worker’s plan is the el
imination of tardiness.
Revision: One worker’s plan eliminates tardiness.
3.在以“here”或“there”開頭的句子中,把“be”動詞後的名詞代詞變成改寫句的主語。
例如:
1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.
Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.
2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.
Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.
二、多用語意具體的動詞
例如:練習地址:
英語四級保持句意簡潔明瞭
1. Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.
Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.
2. Poor: She is a careful shopper.
Better: She compares prices and quality.
三、儘量運用主動語態。例如:
1. Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.
Better: Charity has supported the organization.
2. Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.
Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.
四、防止使用語意冗長累贅的詞語。例如:
1. Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.
Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk.
2. Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.
Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.
3. Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
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Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
4. Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.
Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.
五、杜絕濫用陳舊詞語或難懂的專業術語。例如:
1. Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.
Improved: They will not agree to any of his proposals.
可多參考:
平臺練習。
2. Weak: I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.
Improved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.