How To Improve Students' Mental Health
1. 大學生心理健康很重要
2. 為此，學校可以…
3. 我們自己應該…
【範文(推薦熟讀或背誦) 】
Mental health is becoming an increasingly troublesome issue for undergraduates. We can easily get all
kinds of information about college students’ pressure or emotional problems on the Internet. Solving
the problem needs collaborative efforts between universities and students themselves.
On the one hand, authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation. To begin with,
schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide chances for the students to ease their
’s more, some are physically strong, but mentally weak in terms of coping with difficult
situations. Teachers may have a chance to find them in advance. Besides, specialists in this field are to
be required to make full preparation for cases in time.
On the other hand, students should try to face the reality and figure out the causes of depression so
that they can better understand it. They should also learn how to identify unhealthy behaviors or
thoughts and make changes accordingly.
【解析】
一、結構：
1、大結構：現狀;一方的.對策;另一方的對策。
2、小結構(第二段) ：三點並列
二、句型用法：
1、動名詞做主語：(Solving the problem) needs collaborative efforts ....
2、插入語：To begin with, schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide......
3、be to do 結構：這裡表示“應該”，另有“必須”、“將要”、“命中註定”之義。
三、短語與片語的用法
1、同義替換，儘量避免過多的低階詞彙：
issue 比 problem 更正式，本例使用 issue 也是為了避免與本段第三行的 problem 重複。
2、副詞+動詞：
better understand it=understand it better，但前面的表達更自然，讀起來比較簡潔。
