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英語四六級寫作技巧之少用關係代詞

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Where possible, reduce the use of which, who that whom whether... or not etc.

英語四六級寫作技巧之少用關係代詞

少用關係代詞

學會運用關係代詞是你學習英文過程中的一個重要的階段。學會少用它們則表明你取得了更大的進步。在校對你的'作品時,仔細檢查一下所有的whichs, whos thats和whoms是否必要。刪除不必要的關係代詞會使你的文章更精彩。

Example:

Unnecessary: It is a truth that is universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.

Better: It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.

-- Jane Austin

注:被動語態修飾的名詞通常不須用關係代詞。

Unnecessary: In 1970 India dedicated a nuclear power plant near Bombay, which was built with American assistance.

Improved: In 1970 India dedicated a nuclear power plant near Bombay, built with American assistance.

Unnecessary: During this period, Churchill spoke for a nation which was undivided and curiously happy, as it has never been in my lifetime, before or since.

Improved: During this period, Churchill spoke for a nation undivided and curiously happy, as it has never been in my lifetime, before or since.