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2014雅思寫作指導:如何增加文章表現力

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一、避免使用語意弱的“be”動詞。

2014雅思寫作指導:如何增加文章表現力

1、把句中的表語轉換為不同的'修飾語。

這個技巧並不是那麼容易掌握,但是確實是一個能夠提高雅思寫組成績的非常實用的技巧。

例如:

Weak:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.

Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (轉換為前置定語)

Or:The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (轉換為並列結構作後置定語)

  2、將作表語用的形容詞或名詞變為行為動詞。

例如:1) Weak:The team members are good players.

Revision:The team members play well.

2) Weak:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.

Revision:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

 3、在以“here”或“there”開頭的句子中,把“be”動詞後的名詞代詞變成改寫句的主語。

例如:

1) Weak:There is no opportunity for promotion.

Revision:No opportunity for promotion exists.

2) Weak:Here are the books you ordered.

Revision:The books you ordered have arrived.

 二、多用語意具體的動詞,保持句意簡潔明瞭。

這樣的具體描寫可以讓文章看起來更具說服力,當然也就可以提高雅思寫作成績了。

例如:

1、Poor:My supervisor went past my desk.

Better:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

2、Poor:She is a careful shopper.

Better:She compares prices and quality.

三、儘量運用主動語態。

之所以要這樣做,是因為很多人不明白什麼時候該用主動,什麼時候該用被動。用錯了,當然也就談不上提高雅思寫作成績了。

例如:

1、Weak:The organization has been supported by charity.

Better:Charity has supported the organization.

2、Weak:The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

Better:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

 四、防止使用語意冗長累贅的詞語。

想要提高雅思寫作成績就得使寫作的用詞簡單,生動。

例如:

1、Wordy:My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.

Improved:My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

2、Wordy:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.

Improved:We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

3、Redundant:We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

Improved:We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

4、Redundant:My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.

Improved:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.

五、杜絕濫用陳舊詞語或難懂的專業術語。

這是語言考試,不是專業考試,提高雅思寫作成績的關鍵點在語言上,是文章的表現力上!

例如:

1、Weak:They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.

Improved:They will not agree to any of his proposals.

2、Weak:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.

Improved:I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.