2016年12月英語四六級考試將在12月17日舉行，大家備考得如何了呢?下面是yjbys網小編提供給大家關於英語四級寫作滿分作文精選，希望對同學們的備考有所幫助。
作文一：
題目要求：
Directions: Write a composition entitled On Disasters. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 人的一生中，可能會遇到一些災難事件，給我們的生活帶來意外 的打擊。
2. 面對災難，我們應該堅強，不要過於沉湎於悲痛，要積極面對人生。
3. 我的看法。
參考範文：
On Disasters
An old saying goes: Life is full of roses and thorns. As we all know, one’s life is full of unexpected events, some of which are wonderful and some of which are disastrous. Those heavy blows, such as, floods, snowstorms, and earthquakes, threaten to weigh one down.
However、it’s even worse if one can’t drag himself out of the grief in that mental break-down is more serious than the disaster itself. Instead of indulging oneself in sadness, one should take positive attitude towards life and contribute to the reconstruction of his or her life and hometown.
As for me, if I am lucky enough to survive in a disaster, I will try my best to help those who are suffering by donation blood or money. If I am a victim, I will endeavor to recover from the sadness as soon as possible and be certain to be strong and supportive to the recovery work.
作文二：
Pickpocketing
Yesterday, I witnessed a theft incident on my way home. While waiting for a bus, a woman took her wallet out and paid for a newspaper at a nearby newspaper booth,. After putting her wallet back into her handbag she began to look through the new titles when a middle-aged man brushed past her muttering “Excuse me”. Swiftly, her wallet was in the man’s hand.
The crazy pickpocketing has become a national epidemic and poses a grave threat to the residents’ and visitors’ property safety. Pickpocketing prevention, which is a tough task for police, makes senses. All sides involved in this problem must join their efforts to remove this social cancer.
Everyone shares the huge responsibility for demonstrating their justice at proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious society.
點評
描述一次親眼目睹的事實，一次引出全文的主題。Witness用詞準確。Brush此處為動詞，說明小偷推擠的.動作想說子拂過般既輕又快，描述生動形象。含有諷刺意味的Swiftly與句中的動詞brush呼應，自然承接前一句。
指出扒竊行為的危害，crazy，National epidemic和poses a grave threat to等詞表現出此危害的嚴重性。Tough和句中的比喻social cancer意在譴責此類卑劣行徑。
最後兩句話呼籲大家攜手努力，消除扒竊，共建和諧社會，點明文章主題。
