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六級預測寫作範文《留守兒童》

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留守兒童指的是由於父母一方或雙方外出打工而被留在家鄉或寄宿在親戚家中,長期與父母過著分開居住、生活的兒童。留守兒童的現象一般只在中國被提及,也是中國近年出現的一個嚴重社會現象。下面,就此為話題,小編送上一篇六級預測寫作。

六級預測寫作範文《留守兒童》

Left-behind Children in the Countryside

留守兒童的現象在農村非常普遍

這種現象帶來的弊端

我認為該如何處理這些問題

Left-behind Children in the Countryside

At present, the phenomenon of left-behind children is becoming unprecedentedly visible in China. According to a recent survey con-ducted by CCTV, the past five years has witnessed a sharp increase in the number of left-behind children to an astonishing number of 3,240,000.

It goes without saying that there are many disadvantages. To begin with, left-behind children are not taken good care of by their parentsbecause of the distance. Therefore, many of them are rather weak physically and psychologically. Whafs more, they are easily led astray due to the absence of parental love and guidance, even being lured to commit crimes.

As far as I am concerned, measures should be taken to solve the problem. People should endeavor to offer love and concern to these children. The parents in particular should not make money at the sacri-fice of ignorance of their children. Also, policies should be implemen-ted so that left-behind children from countryside can have equal access to educational opportunities,medical care and other services with other children. (168)

 範文點評

很顯然,第一段的大寫字母和資料能迅速抓住閱卷老師的眼 球。同時使用了 witness, sharp等好詞,以及the past five years作主 語的修辭手法,無疑增加了文章的`亮點。

快捷構思

第一段:直接提出該段中心“留守兒童的現象在農村非常普 遍”。而後,“一句話”更加形象地說明最近五年留守 兒童的數量很多。

第二段:模板句提出該段主題句“這種現象帶來的弊端”。緊 接著列出 了兩種弊端:are not taken good care of by their parents 和 easily led astray due to the absence of parental love and guidance 0

第三段:直接展現該段中心“我認為該如何處理這些問題”。 分別從大眾、家長等角度給出解決問題的辦法。

好詞佳句

-behind children 留守兒童

ecedentedly 史無前例地 lured to 被吸引

avor to 努力,嘗試

the sacrifice of ignorance of their children 以忽略孩子為代價