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所考話題為大學生熟悉的非社會熱點話題:商品過度包裝。

大學英語四級考試作文點評

題目:On Excessive Packaging

提綱:1. 目前很多商品存在過度包裝現象

2. 出現這一現象的原因

3. 我對這一現象的看法和建議

簡易範文如下:

首段:現象描述

In contemporary society, it has become a trend for many products or items to be excessively packaged. In the meanwhile, an increasing number of customers find it more expensive to purchase these goods. Taking a look around, we can find a great many examples in supermarkets: excessive packages of food, clothes and gifts.

當今社會,商品往往被過度包裝。同時,越來越多顧客發現這些商品更貴了。看看我們周圍,可以發現超市中就有很多這樣的例子:食品,服飾和禮物都存在過度包裝。

二段:原因分析

It is evident that the causes of this phenomenon are diverse. In the first place, some customers psychological need is the root cause. These packages bring the sense of beauty, arouse peoples enthusiasm to buy, and help manufacturers to promote sale. In the second place, it is these packages that enable shops to build up a foundation for advertising. As a matter of fact, industries in mounting numbers have come to realize the necessity of packaging for sale.