They are wasting resources, for example, time, energy and money.
上面這句話不錯,只是轉折詞for example不妥當;應該這樣:
They are wasting resources. For example, they use too much time, energy and money.
不然就要換一換轉折詞,改用such as或like:
They are wasting resources, such as time, energy and money.
不管任何語言,轉折詞(transitional words)都扮演著一個重要角色,就是:承先啟後,使句子緊湊,段落相吸,對文章結構,有良性作用。但是有些人幾乎沒有採用轉折詞的習慣,結果文句鬆散,上下文七零八亂,應該避免。
現在把主要轉折詞,分類列下,供大家參考。
Ⅰ表示尤有進者的意思:
Again, also, then, besides, further, furthermore, moreover, next, in addition等,如:
① Jason teaches diligently. Besides, he writes a lot.
② English is a useful language. For one thing, it is an official language in the UN. Then, it is widely used in business, science and technology.
Ⅱ表示反意見:
But, however, still, yet, after all, for all that, in spite of, on the contrary, on the other hand等,如:
③ Jim is intelligent but lazy.
④ Singapore is not a big the contrary, it is very small.