【摘要】考研英語作文分數作為僅次於閱讀理解的的'題型，成為很多考生心頭的痛。由於不知什麼樣的作文可吸引閱卷人而無法提高，本文小編為大家整理2014考研英語一大作文的滿分作文，讓廣大考生抓住複習方向!
This picture,which illustrates the importance of love and help between parents and children,consist softwod first drawing shows what a mother and a daughter were like 30 years e second drawing,in contrast,shows what the mother and the daughter are like mother was taking the daughter’s hand in the first drawing while the daughter is aiding the mother in the second.
第一段作者非常樸實的描寫了圖畫內容，沒有過難的詞彙;邏輯清晰：段落總分總，首句為主題句，二三句分述，最後一句總結。亮點還在於句型多變。首句一個簡單句新增插入結構，三句也同樣使用插入語，實現華麗變身。
本篇文章由兩圖構成，使用的”incontrast”，”while”同學們應該學習。
What is intended to show in the picture is clear:parents should help their children when the latter are young,and the children,when growing up,should take care of their parents who have by now grown is what makes a family.
二段詳細闡釋圖畫含義：父母與子女之間應該相攜。值得學習的地方是要變換說法，避免單調重複。
Impacted by the change in life styles,China is witnessing some kind of disinte gration or loosing of ties in family relation ,the love between parents and children is not only eternal,but the basic component of a healthy upon the solid foundation of domestic well being can the skyscraper of social progress be built;but if that be loosening,the construction up on it,however to wering and glorious,would fall in evitably in your parents and love your children.
三段提出了自己的建議和評論。句型更加豐富多樣，不僅採用插入結構(最後一句)，首句採用過去分詞，第三句採用only半倒裝句。
總之，滿分作文多能夠緊扣思想，行文邏輯非常清晰，表達地道，句型結構豐富多變。希望同學們認真學習此篇滿分檔作文，爭取在不久的考試中拔得頭籌，取得勝利!
