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解讀雅思大作文是如何舉例子的呢

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本文通過外顯連線和內化連線,啟發應試者在雅思作文中有話可說,通過舉例子來證明自己的觀點。

解讀雅思大作文是如何舉例子的呢

  一、外顯連線

所謂外顯連線是指用特定的連線詞將相關資訊進行連線。通常情況下,例子作為論據由for example, for instance, like, such as, take… as 等引出。

如:it is undeniable that mobile phones have facilitated our lives in many different ways. For example, when an emergency occurs, such as a traffic accident or a violent crime, mobile phones can help the victims to call the police or an ambulance immediately for help.

本例中,for example 引出例子論證“mobile phones have facilitated our lives in many different ways.” 而後面的 such as 則引出emergency 的具體形式。For instance 與它的用法完全相同,即後面要接句子例證。 Like, such as, take…as 等直接名詞(或相當於名詞的詞)。由於這些都是基本常識,這裡不再贅述。

為了使連線詞多樣化,建議考生運用下面的一些短語(或句式)連線論點和論據:

…is a case in point;

…serve as a typical example

…can be taken as an example;

one example is that…

another one is that等

如:Working part time when you are studying in university is beneficial to your life. I myself is a case in point(or ‘my experiences serve as a typical example’). Through those experiences, I have learned to be independent and responsible.

  二、內化連線

實際上,大家看原汁原味的文英文文章會發現有些資訊的連線不用外顯式,而是通過某些特定的詞或者特定的方式給讀者以清晰的層次感, 從而使文章資訊傳遞更通暢。

下面我們來看一下哪些例證可以省去連線詞,實現內化連線。

  1、人物經歷作例子

其中的'人物可以是名人,Thomas Edison gave us an example that success only comes after persistence and hard work. 也可以是作者自己的親身經歷 I remember that ten years ago cell phones were unusual and seldom seen. 人物經歷作例子因為其較強的故事性而引人關注。但是切記,如果運用名人做例證,要注意資訊的準確性; 如果運用自己的親身經歷做例子則要注意例子選擇是否典型、有說服力。但是無論怎樣,有人物經歷時,一定會給人以非常明確的細節資訊的感覺,所以完全可以省去連線詞。

  2、數字資訊作例子:

引入帶有數字資訊的例證,除可以更具體、更詳實的說明觀點外,也可以內化連線詞,因為數字資訊所要傳遞的一定是一個量化的概念,而這一概念就是它所要論證的中心。看個例子:

The work was immense: filling about eighty large notebooks (and without a library to hand), Johnson wrote the definitions of over 40,000 words, and illustrated their many meanings with some 114,000 quotations drawn from English writing on every subject, from the Elizabethans to his own time.

例子中immense是觀點中心詞,後面的具體數字都是對這一中心詞的佐證。(當然我們不要忘記這裡“:”也是在幫助這段文字內化連線,相當於“for example”)

  3、專有名詞資訊作例子

人名、地名屬於細節資訊的範疇,也經常出現在例證中,以一種’fact’的形式出現。如:

Air pollution is increasingly becoming the focus of government and citizen concern around the globe. From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and Tokyo, new solutions to this old problem are being proposed and implemented with ever increasing speed.當你看到這些地名時,一定會想到它們是某一類具有相同性質的地域的代表,那麼自然也就是’點’資訊,而非‘面’資訊,從而可以省去連線詞的使用,卻依然保持主次分明。

其它諸如期刊雜誌名、書名等專有名詞也可以有類似的用法。

  4、一些小的介詞(短語)引導例子

如果大家注意總結,會發現雅思閱讀文章中有一些介詞(短語)也可以引出例子。

如:from…to: Toughened glass is found everywhere, from cars and bus shelters to the windows, walls and roofs of thousands of buildings around the world.

再如:including: …..

Other substances were then introduced: including fillers, catalysts and hexa.

這裡including 相當於such,like等。

綜上,舉例論證除了需要牢牢掌握大家熟知的表舉例的連線詞外,還要注意積累一些隱去連線詞卻嵌入一些表細節資訊的詞彙的情況,或者注意學習老外用標點符號以及被我們輕視的一些小詞來標示文章層次的巧妙的做法。同時,同學們也要關注一下,人物經歷和事實資訊(尤其是帶有數字、專有名詞的事實)作例證更有說服力也非常容易掌握。所以同學們要從舉例論證的連線詞、常用例子型別等角度全面掌握舉例論證,從而讓舉例論證更好地論證觀點,更好的為雅思大作文服務。