策略之一：用介詞短語替代從句。
例:
Wordy: While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.
Better: During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.
Wordy: When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.
Stylish English is ...
Concise
簡潔才是美
好的寫作，首先而且至關重要的一點就是簡潔。繁冗的寫作堆砌了許多無用的詞藻，反而減弱表述的清晰度。當然，也不能僅僅因為簡短就認為短句一定優於長句。只要一個單詞確實能起到一定的作用，它就應該留在句中。一般來說，只有在進行強調或修飾、美化句子時，才能使用重複的單詞、語音和短語。修改文章，就是要刪繁就簡。比較下面這對句子，注意體會二者的差別及效果。
1) Dr. Sun Yat-sen went to Japan by means of a big boat.
2) Dr. Sun Yat-sen went to Japan by boat.
斜體字部分較囉嗦，因為"by"就是"by means of boat"。
Better: At the second traffic light turn left.
策略之二：刪除諸如"who is”或"that is"之類的'關係代詞，變從句為短語。
例:
Wordy: The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.
Better: The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.
注：把句中的”three parts”改用形容詞來表達，節省了四個不必要的單詞”which is written in”。我們經常可以將關係代詞如”that”去掉，這隻會引起最少的變動。
策略之三：剔除你不需要的單詞
"Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call. "
寫完這樣的句子後，你自己再讀一遍，挑出單詞”joint”和”telephone”，注意刪去不必要的詞。
策略之四：表達否定意義時，儘量避免使用否定詞。英語中很多詞不用 "no’s" 或者"not’s"也能表達否定含義的詞彙，你儘可以採取更為委婉的表達方式。
例：
Thus college students who do not have sufficient financial backing ,
也就是 college students who lacks sufficient financial backing。
如果你不想使用太多的否定詞，就應該儘量避免使用它們。
