It has become harder and harder for a teen-ager to stand up against the popularity wave and to go his or her own way. Industry firmly carved out a teen-age market. These days every teen-ager can learn from the advertisements what a teen-ager should have and be. And many of todays parents have come to award high marks for the popularity of their children. All this adds up to a great barrier for the teen-ager who wants to find his or her own path.
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1.第一句結論句，後面跟著解釋
2.第二、三句 Industry... 工業廣告對青少年的影響
3.第四句 And many of... 父母親對青少年的影響
come to 逐漸如何 award 獎勵，鼓勵; popularity 潮流，名聲
But the barrier is worth climbing over. The path is worth following. You may want to listen to classical music instead of going to a party. You may want to collect rocks when everyone else is collecting records. You may have some thoughts that you dont care to share at once with your classmates. Well, go to it. Find yourself. Be yourself. Popularity will come-with the people who respect you for who you are. Thats the only kind of popularity that really counts.
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2.三個 you may 舉例來支援前面一句話The path is worth following.
yourself. 提出建議,後面句子給出原因
