2015年6月英語四級作文外教版範文和評析(滬江網校版)Part I Writing
Online shopping has been a boon to many industries and companies looking to expand their markets. Also, it’s convenient for shoppers who are too busy to leave the house. However, in some cases nothing can replace a true face to face shopping experience.
Internet shopping is convenient for the mothers who spend all day doing house chores and for the fathers who work a full-time job. On the other hand, there are limits to shopping online, for example: guessing the correct size of clothing on a computer screen can be very frustrating.
For the busy mother and father, online shopping is a very useful and convenient tool. But, there are instances, like clothes shopping, where nothing beats the real thing.
點評：
作者在第一段描述了網購作為一種時尚給大家的生活帶來了便利，然後話鋒一轉，說網購仍然取代不了面對面的購物交流。
第二段主要還是從正反兩方面分析了網購的優勢和不足，以此描述大家對網購的'不同反應。
第三段作者表明了自己的觀點，對網購的便利和不足之處都做了描述。
綜合來講，本篇文章觀點明確，結構清晰，語言表達地道，有不少閃光詞彙，但是，內容深度上來講還有些欠缺，另外，最後一部分表達個人觀點，和第二段稍有重複。考生需要注意觀點的清晰，不宜模稜兩可。
2004年6月19日大學英語四級作文題目
A brief introduction to a tourist attraction
2004年6月19日大學英語四級作文範文
Welcome everyone, I am glad that you can come to Pingyao County, where there is the oldest Confucius temple. It was opened to the public Monday after a one-year renovation project.
I hope you can appreciate the spot indeed.
First, I will show the main building of the temple, its the most interesting spot here.
Second, we can walk around to see the other area of the spot. Finally, I will tell the history of the temple.
The main building of the temple was built in 1163, in the Yuan Dynasty , and has a history of more than 840 years.
Compared with other famous Confucius temples nationwide, it was built 248 years earlier than that in Beijing, and 317 years earlier than that in Qufu City, Confucius's home in east China's Shandong Province. The temple in Qufu was added to the list of the World Cultural Heritages in 1995. The Pingyao Confucius Temple has China's largest statue collection of Confucius and famous ancient Confucian scholars. Covering a total area of 40,000 square meters, the temple has 112 buildings in 16 categories. that is the history of the temple.
Please visit as you like. If you have any questions, you can ask me. That's all.
