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預測作文(二) Opening Psychological Courses 1. 許多人建議大學開設心理課程 2. 我對這一問題的看法【範文】 Recently more and more educator and common citizens suggest that universities colleges open more courses which are helpful for students' psychological health. Personally, I fully agree with their proposal for the following reasons. On the one hand, the ever-increasing pressure of study at the moment and job-hunting in the future may lead to many psychological problems such as anxiety, depression and even despair, and the psychological courses open a door for communication and relaxation. On the other hand, such courses can teach students how to regulate feelings and emotions under different situations, which is a good preparation for the future life in the complex social network. Finally, these courses also introduce good habits which are conducive to mental and psychological health. To be mature and qualified citizens in the society, students have to do more than study hard. In a word, I warmly welcome the establishment of psychological courses in universities. In my mind, they are good for students' psychological development. 【點評】首段提出主題,其中第二句為過渡句,引出下文;第二段提出三點同意的理由;最後一段得出結論,與第一段首句呼應,其中第二句是解釋型的補充說明句。 範文首段提出許多人建議大學開設心理課程。作者同意這一建議,並分三點在第二段中敘述理由。首先,目前的學習以及將來的就業壓力需要開設心理課程。其次,教會學生如何調整在不同環境下的情緒。最後,給學生介紹有利於其身心健康的好習慣。第三段總結呼應首段內容。 第二段第一點中的ever-increasing表示“一直在增加的.”,修飾兩個名詞片語,對比鮮明,at the moment表示“現在”,in the future表示“將來”,open a door for…表示“開啟了……之門”;第二點中的regulate表示“調節,控制”;第三點中的conducive表示“有益於……的”,後接介詞to。預測作文(一)

大學英語四級作文範例

My View on Double BA Degree

1. 現在大學生讀雙學位的現象很常見

2. 我對這一現象的看法

【範文】

Recently it has become a common phenomenon for college students to have two majors at the same time. In this way, they can get double BA degrees when they graduate from the university several years later.

Although it may bring unfavorable consequences, we can be sure to conclude that this practice is favorable on the whole. To begin with, most students will become more hardworking and efficient in order to finish the learning tasks satisfactorily. Moreover, with two degrees at hand after graduation, they will stand a better chance in the job market full of fierce competition. In the third place, as for today's university students, tuition and fees are becoming more and more expensive. If they can make achievements in study at school and find a satisfactory job afterwards, it will not be a big problem.

Weighing the pros and cons of such a new trend, we can naturally arrive at the conclusion that it is beneficial and rewarding. This system not only compels students to work hard, but also prepares them for the coming competition.

【點評】

首段直接點題,說明現象;第二段分述三個優點,其中首句為讓步狀語從句,意思是“雖然可能帶來負面的後果,但總體上是有益的”;第三段呼應第二段,得出結論。

範文首段提出大學生讀雙學位這一普遍現象;第二段分三點進行論述,其中前兩點是優點,即學生會更加勤奮,並且有利於他們在激烈的求職市場中找到工作,最後一點是解釋可能帶來的學費問題並不嚴重;第三段下結論,呼應第二段。

第二段第三句中的stand a better chance(of)表示“大有希望”;第三段末句中的compel do sth.表示“迫使某人做某事”。