Test for National Civil Servants
In recent years, there have been more and more people who have participated in the test for national civil servants. And among them, the highly-educated, like masters and doctors, take quite a large percentage. The craze in civil servant test has attracted widespread attention. Personally , among all the factors that account for this trend, the following are worth mentioning.
引言部分 ：作者先交代背景知識 ，注意這裡不是照搬題乾的內容，而是換種說法（如果題 幹部分的內容較多，可以進行簡單的'概述 ），然後用personally引出自己的觀點。
Above all, nowadays college students face great employment pressure. Civil servant, as one of the most stable professions in today’s China, becomes their preferable choice. Moreover, in recent years, the welfare and salary of civil servants have been improved greatly, which undoubtedly attracts many people. Besides, the high social status of civil servants is an important factor drawing many people to take part in the civil servant test.
主體部分：作者從學生的就業壓力、公務員的福利薪資和社會地位三個方面說明國考熱的原 因。連線詞分別使用了above all ，moreover和besides ，當然也可以使用firstly，secondly ，and lastly等。
In my opinion, this fad in civil servant test will continue in the following years. However, in the long run, it doesn’t do good to the development of the nation. If most high quality talents gather in the government departments, it might lead to a waste of resources. Therefore, both the individuals and the government should have a more objective recognition of the civil servant test craze.
總結部分 ：作者用in my opinion來引出自己對國考熱的預測：國考熱會繼續，但是從長期 的角度來說，對國家的發展是不利的，因此政府和個人都應該更客觀地看待這個事情。整個文章都體現了一種客觀的思考 ，文風正式穩健。
