文章開門見山,直接點題.寫出作者極度喜歡電視節目的嗜好,接著說明其原因,條理清晰,語言流暢
I like watching TV very much. I usually spend much time watching TV every day . There are several reasons why I like watching TV. There are many interesting and lively programmes on TV with sound and images. I can choose the prpgrammes I like. Watching TV can bring me happiness and I can learn a lot about the world at the same time and so on.
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I like watching TV very much. I usually spend much time watching TV every day . There are several reasons why I like watching TV. There are many interesting and lively programmes on TV with sound and images. I can choose the prpgrammes I like.
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本文圍繞我喜歡看電視展開描寫,對看電視的.時間,喜歡看電視的原因,喜歡的電視節目一一進行了描述。用詞恰當,內容完整。